Thursday, March 22, 2012

Spring is for Marbles

(This is one of my older writings, polished up a bit to reflect what I am learning in writers' group and through ACFW.)


Will wriggled in his seat and glanced up at the clock. The second hand crawled around its face.

He put his hand inside his desk and felt the bulging bag loaded with a new supply of marbles. Shucks, it’s the first day of clear weather, and all the guys are ready to shoot marbles. When will 10:00 o’clock come? This morning is dragging!

B-rrrr-ing!  Mrs. Adams looked up from her desk. "Class is dismissed for recess."

Will grabbed his bag, shot out the door, and down the stairs. He took a deep breath of mild spring air, and headed for the dirt next to the tarred playground, where the girls played jumprope, and broke out the chalk for hopscotch. His friends, Davey and Joey, waited for him.

Davey called to Will. "We were wonderin’ what was taking you so long. I’ve got the circle drawn and we’re ready to go." He tossed the stick off to the side and knelt down at the edge of the circle.

Joey opened his drawstring bag and took out a handful of polished marbles in varying colors and knelt down across from Davey. "My dad took me to the hardware store, and they’ve got a bunch of new colors."

He put the marbles in his hands and held them out for the other two to look at. "I got some green and yellow opaques, and white and red ones, too. I saved my birthday money this year to buy them."

He dropped them on the ground next to the circle, then picked up a large, clear red one. "Dad bought me this popper that’s a whooper!"

Will laughed at the rhyme. He dropped to his knees at the edge of the circle and dug a fistful of marbles out of his bag. "Well, let’s go."

Each boy put three marbles in the center of the circle.Will picked up one of the marbles and took aim at a straight line drawn next to the circle. His marble rolled across the dirt coming within inches of the line.

Joey shot his marble, but it had too much momentum and rolled across the line.

 Davey looked at the other marbles. He lined up his shot and flicked it across the circle. His marble pushed Will’s across the line and came to rest just on this side of the line. "There you go!" he yelled.

Will looked at Davey. "Okay, you get to go first."

"Hey, can I play too?"

Will stood up and turned around. He saw Petey, Joey’s little brother, watching them.

"Nah," said Joey, with a wave of his hand. "Go play with your first grade friends."

Davey nodded in agreement. "Yeah, we’re fourth graders now, and serious marble players." He rolled his eyes at Will.

"Let’s let him play this one time, " Will said.

Joey stood up, stuffed his hands in his pockets, and looked at his friends. "If we let Petey play, we’ll have to give him his marbles back when the game was over, or he might cry."

Will walked over to Joey and put his hand on Joey’s shoulder. He leaned in and whispered, " If we let him play this one time, then for the rest of the school year, he can teach his own friends how to play."

Joey shrugged and turned to his brother. "Okay, but you gotta put three marbles in the circle first and you go last in shooting."

Petey’s face broke into a big grin, and he put his three marbles down.

  Davey placed his glassy popper on his index finger and took aim with his thumb. POP! Off went the marble, traveling into the circle, knocking one of Joey’s and one of Will’s marbles out of the ring.

"YAY!" yelled Davey, "my first captives." He picked up the two marbles and placed them in his pile.

 Joey stepped to the edge of the circle, knelt down, and took aim for Davey’s marbles. It went right straight out of the circle without hitting a single one. "Aw! What was that?"

His friends giggled, but they knew that was the risk they all took.

 Will knelt down. He preferred to knock his marble with a snap of his middle finger. Off it went, hitting two of Petey’s and one of Davey’s out of the circle. "Three for me!" he exclaimed.

Petey stepped up. His brother sighed, "He can’t play, he’s just going to lose all his marbles."

"I can so," Petey shot back. "I’ve watched ya’ play before." His lower lip pouted a little. Being smaller than the others, he stood and dropped his marble into the circle. It clicked off Davey’s and hit one of Joey’s, too, both of which rolled out of the circle in opposite directions.

"See, I can too play." and he proudly bent to pick up his two captives.

Joey sighed and crossed his arms. "Your turn, Davey."

Davey took aim at one of Will’s marbles, but the popper fell off his finger and only wobbled across the circle line.

"Oh no!" He grabbed his stomach and groaned.

Will pointed to Davey’s popper. "Yes! That one is mine. It’s the prize I’m aiming for." Will smiled at his buddies and rubbed his hands together. "It’s ripe for the picking." He knew Davey would be disappointed to lose his popper. After school, I’ll trade it back to him for four marbles, but I’m not tellin’ him that yet.

Will took direct aim at the popper. "Whoo! She’s a goner!" He scooped up the popper and held his fist up in the air.

B-rrrrr-ing! "Oh no!" the boys cried in one voice. Recess was over. They each picked up their marbles and headed back toward the school, calling out their farewells.

"Catch up with you guys later."

"Bye!"

"Good game!"

Will ran up the steps into the school. He smiled. It’s gonna be a good spring.
          
(All photos courtesy of Corbisimages.com)

God gives us each of the seasons in their time-go forth and enjoy. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Thursday, March 8, 2012

Genesis Contest Update

                There's good news and bad news on the contest front.

First, the good news: there were a total of just under 700 entries for all nine genres. That averages 77 per genre. That's good! As mentioned previously, I expected there would be a thousand in my category alone, so that figure certainly increases my odds. I have a 1 in 26 chance in making it to the top three. That would be AWESOME! That's more doable than the 1 in 200 that I thought I might be.

The bad news is: they don't have enough judges in the contemporary fiction category, so none of them have started to be judged yet. That means that when the judges finally get the entries, they may be more rushed to get them ready for the review deadline. That may not be good. I don't know if I have enough meat in my first fifteen pages to hook a judge right away so that they want to read more of my story.

However, in the long run, it's out of my hands and I need to be PATIENT! (I'm yelling so I can hear me tell myself that...)

Saturday, March 3, 2012

One Word that Leads to Another

What do lightning, scar, wound, bleeding, pain, heartbreak, rain, spatter, fry, fish, jelly and peanut butter all have in common? A story! My writers'/critique group, Androscoggin Writers' Group, did a word association activity and this is how the list formed as the paper went twice around the table. So far only one member has written something, but I am going to use those words in my novel. I did a slight revision at the end of my fourth chapter so the next chapter can incorporate all those words. What a neat way to have the next chapter unfold itself! If we hadn't done this exercise,  this chapter would never have been created.  Wow.  Life is like that sometimes, too. What if...or if only...

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